{"id":5203,"date":"2020-06-12T05:00:17","date_gmt":"2020-06-12T12:00:17","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/?p=5203"},"modified":"2020-06-01T16:09:52","modified_gmt":"2020-06-01T23:09:52","slug":"mark-reads-the-fifth-season-chapter-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/2020\/06\/mark-reads-the-fifth-season-chapter-2\/","title":{"rendered":"Mark Reads &#8216;The Fifth Season&#8217;: Chapter 2"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In the second chapter of <i>The Fifth Season<\/i>, HEY WHAT THE FUCK. <i>WHAT THE FUCK<\/i>. If you\u00e2\u20ac\u2122re intrigued, then it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s time for Mark to read <i>The Broken Earth<\/i>.<!--more--><\/p>\n<p><b>Trigger Warning: For extensive discussion of slavery, homophobia.<\/b><\/p>\n<p>Hi. HI. THIS BOOK IS WASTING NO TIME ON MY EMOTIONAL DESTRUCTION.<\/p>\n<p>I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m so thrilled that we have now jumped to third person, and I have a bunch of questions about that. Because like\u00e2\u20ac\u00a6 shit. When is this <i>happening<\/i>? Is this happening at the same time as the events with Essun? Is the third person a little hint that maybe this is in another timeline? I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t know! And I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t know that I need to know that yet, especially since this chapter provides SO much information that I needed.<\/p>\n<p>Once again, Jemisin finds a brilliant means of getting exposition to the reader. here, it comes from Schaffa Guardian Warrant, the Guardian who is initially mistaken as a child-buyer by Damaya Strongback. (And now I get what a Strongback is!) Before I jump into Schaffa\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s role (I DO NOT TRUST HIM AT ALL), let\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s talk about that mistaken identity. I suppose it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s possible that Schaffa is <i>also<\/i> a child-buyer, but I feel like the text makes it clear by the end that Damaya\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s parents didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t actually sell her off. In that, though, is a terrifying reveal about this world: PARENTS CAN LEGALLY SELL OFF THEIR CHILDREN. There are, of course, echoes of chattel slavery here as well, and that\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s where I thought this was going. Damaya\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s parents realized she was an orogene, and they despised her (and were afraid of her) so much that they were going to sell her off so as not to have to deal with her.<\/p>\n<p>What actually happens is no less heartbreaking, even if it is complicated. Tied up in this is my deep distrust of Schaffa. While he offers kindness to Damaya in some contexts, even those are layered with other meanings. Even when we\u00e2\u20ac\u2122re first meeting him, that\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s on display. There\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s that part where Damaya realizes that Schaffa has been softly reprimanding her own mother for how she has treated her daughter. It\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s the first time that she feels that the child-buyer is a little strange, and that\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s before she sees his white skin or his flat hair:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>It isn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t the sort of reprimand Damaya is used to. The man hasn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t raised his voice or called anyone names.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>But that\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s only the tip of the iceberg. When he told Damaya that he wouldn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t let her mother hurt her, I didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t know what place that came from. Was he being genuine? Was it a manipulative tactic to get her to come with him? Because seriously, this part made me feel TERRIBLE things:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>But then the child-buyer smiles at Damaya, and she doesn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t even think twice before she smiles back. She trusts him immediately. She knows she shouldn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t, but she does.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>See, I can\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t tell if this is Damaya\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s personal reaction or if Schaffa had some weird power of her. Or both! I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m thinking of that \u00e2\u20ac\u0153ritual\u00e2\u20ac\u009d he did by touching her neck, the one he says is to help find her if she gets lost. WHICH READS LIKE A TRACKER TO ME. He doesn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t want her to escape once she gets to the Fulcrum, right? Yes, it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s possible that he <i>does<\/i> feel concern for her, that he does want to protect her, but what is that desire wrapped up in? He clearly believes that his role as a Guardian is a noble, necessary thing. So is his kindness linked to this notion of the greater good? Of how orogenes provide service for the Stillness? Does he think of orogenes as a means to an end rather than full people?<\/p>\n<p>At the other end of the spectrum is Damaya\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s mother. There is no kindness there, despite that Schaffa <i>tries<\/i> to re-contextualize Damaya\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s parents\u00e2\u20ac\u2122 choice as the appropriate one. Because even if it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s possible that her mother wants the best for her, she has still treated Damaya horribly. That whole example with the cold! In that, we find out that not only did Damaya\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s mother believe a myth about the orogenes, but she allowed her daughter to suffer in the cold. (And there\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s that comment very early on about how they would have kept Damaya in the house if it could\u00e2\u20ac\u2122ve been cold enough.) So that means that they actively gaslight their daughter when she said she was cold.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>Again: tip of the iceberg. Jemisin only gives us glimpses into the abuse and neglect and hatred that Damaya has experienced. It\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s hard not to see parallels to parents who retaliate against their children for being queer or trans, for example. I SPEAK FROM EXPERIENCE HERE. That whole thing where the mother says that Damaya \u00e2\u20ac\u0153pretended to be a child when she was really a monster\u00e2\u20ac\u009d is absolutely something I heard a variant of growing up. That I wasn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t a real man, that I was faking it because I was trying to \u00e2\u20ac\u0153trick\u00e2\u20ac\u009d my parents into accepting me, that they always knew I was \u00e2\u20ac\u0153wrong.\u00e2\u20ac\u009d You get the idea.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>That theme pops up again here, too. Of being wrong. We see it in the memory Damaya recalls the boy she nearly hurt, which is why this whole nightmare got set in motion. Schaffa doesn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t see Damaya as wrong, but that doesn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t make him a good person. Still, I felt like he used his \u00e2\u20ac\u0153wrongness\u00e2\u20ac\u009d to relate to Damaya, We discover that Guardians are pretty much useless to comms when a Season comes. I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t quite understand that, but I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t need to. Schaffa positions himself as an outsider, and then he transitions to a long explanation of why orogenes are outsiders, too, but <i>necessary<\/i> ones.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>I am suspicious of that.<\/p>\n<p>So. Orogenes! Here we go!<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153From birth, an orogene child can stop a shake; even without training, you are orogene. Within a comm or without one, <i>you are orogene<\/i>. With training, however, and with the guidance of other skilled orogenes at the fulcrum, you can be useful not merely to a single comm, but all the Stillness.\u00e2\u20ac\u009d<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>There it is. Not only an explanation, but some necessary context. Orogenes are hated, are believed to be inhuman and wrong, and yet, the people of the Stillness have been using them to keep the entire world put together.<\/p>\n<p>Yeah. That\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s not subtle at all, and it shouldn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t be. Holy shit.<\/p>\n<p>Schaffa tries to offer justification for what Damaya\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s parents are doing, but it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s hard for me to accept this when I know how much cruelty Damaya received. There\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s no love or affection or kindness from her family when Schaffa takes them away, either! Her brother, Chaga, doesn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t even come down to say goodbye! I suppose there\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s another explanation here: Maybe Schaffa is delivering this all as softly as possible so as to make the separation easier. Later on, he could easily tell Damaya the truth. I say that purely because of one line that keeps bugging me:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153You\u00e2\u20ac\u2122re a gift of the earth\u00e2\u20ac\u201dbut Father Earth hates us, never forget, and his gifts are neither free nor safe.\u00e2\u20ac\u009d<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Schaffa says <i>us<\/i>. Not <i>you<\/i>. Why does he include himself in that? Are the Guardians orogene, too, but their powers manifest differently?<\/p>\n<p>I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t know. I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m grasping probably, but that seemed like such a strange thing to say. Schaffa straddles this line so well, and it worries me. Obviously, I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122d much prefer if Damaya had a genuine ally, but this system\u00e2\u20ac\u201dof the Fulcrum and orogenes\u00e2\u20ac\u201dis something he seems devoted to. So what does he ultimately support: The people at the heart of this or the status quo of the system?<\/p>\n<p>I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122M SCARED.<\/p>\n<p><b>Notes<\/b><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Whoa! Third person! HELL YES, I LOVE BOOKS LIKE THIS.<\/li>\n<li>Who is Damaya!!!<\/li>\n<li>hi, what. locked in a barn?? <i>what<\/i>.<\/li>\n<li>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153her kind cannot be held with locks\u00e2\u20ac\u009d oh i don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t like this, i\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m not gonna like this<\/li>\n<li>nomidlats = civilized? ooooh, what does that say about this world?<\/li>\n<li>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153the child-buyer\u00e2\u20ac\u009d yep i\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m gonna be mad<\/li>\n<li>her own fucking parents?????<\/li>\n<li>why would they need cold?<\/li>\n<li>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153sess\u00e2\u20ac\u009d okay is she an orogene???<\/li>\n<li>wait her name???? what the fuck???? Strongback???<\/li>\n<li>Oh shit, comms have a shared surname?<\/li>\n<li>Wait, Resistants are\u00e2\u20ac\u00a6 what the fuck. Are they resistant to disease???<\/li>\n<li>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Nothing about him makes racial sense\u00e2\u20ac\u009d i mean MOOD<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/li>\n<li>NOPE, DON\u00e2\u20ac\u2122T LIKE THE IMMEDIATE TRUSTING<\/li>\n<li>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Duty first\u00e2\u20ac\u009d what the fuck??? why? what did he just do?<\/li>\n<li>NOPE, HE IS GOING TO TRACK HER. I HATE THIS.<\/li>\n<li>holy shit, she\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s an orogene, and there\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s so much going on here, IT\u00e2\u20ac\u2122S SO MUCH<\/li>\n<li>jesus fucking christ this is so fucked up<\/li>\n<li>the fulcrum???<\/li>\n<li>something tells me all this training will be forced and that damaya won\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t be reimbursed for any of it I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122M JUST GUESSING HERE<\/li>\n<li>A Guardian????<\/li>\n<li>i still have a bad feeling about all of this<\/li>\n<li>i\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m still gonna think unkindly about her parents, if you don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t mind<\/li>\n<li>SCHAFFA\u00e2\u20ac\u2122S JUSTIFICATION IS SO ENRAGING.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/li>\n<li>Schaffa defines her power and her instinct, but how do we know that\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s true?<\/li>\n<li>I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t trust Schaffa!!!<\/li>\n<li>Is Schaffa an orogene? He uses \u00e2\u20ac\u0153we\u00e2\u20ac\u009d<\/li>\n<li>hey is this book ever going to let me LIVE<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><b>Mark Links Stuff<\/b><\/p>\n<p>&#8211; <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/us.macmillan.com\/books\/9781250169211\">You can now pre-order my second YA novel, <i>Each of Us a Desert<\/i>, which will be released on September 15, 2020 from Tor Teen!<\/a><br \/>\n&#8211; Not only that, but my very first pre-order campaign is now live for North American readers! <a href=\"http:\/\/bit.ly\/EachOfUsADesertPreorder\">If you submit proof of pre-order, you can get a limited edition print that comes with the book<\/a>.<br \/>\n<\/strong><strong>&#8211; If you&#8217;d like to stay up-to-date on all announcements regarding my books, <a href=\"http:\/\/eepurl.com\/ey636\">sign up for my newsletter<\/a>! DO IT.<\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In the second chapter of The Fifth Season, HEY WHAT THE FUCK. WHAT THE FUCK. If you\u00e2\u20ac\u2122re intrigued, then it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s time for Mark to read The Broken Earth.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[569,570],"tags":[571,413],"class_list":["post-5203","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-the-broken-earth","category-the-fifth-season","tag-mark-reads-the-broken-earth","tag-nk-jemisin"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5203","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=5203"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5203\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=5203"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=5203"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=5203"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}<!-- WP Super Cache is installed but broken. 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