{"id":5162,"date":"2020-04-17T05:00:40","date_gmt":"2020-04-17T12:00:40","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/?p=5162"},"modified":"2020-04-12T17:08:11","modified_gmt":"2020-04-13T00:08:11","slug":"mark-reads-raising-steam-part-24","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/2020\/04\/mark-reads-raising-steam-part-24\/","title":{"rendered":"Mark Reads &#8216;Raising Steam&#8217;: Part 24"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In the twenty-fourth and penultimate part of <i>Raising Steam<\/i>, Rhys tells the truth. Intrigued? Then it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s time for Mark to read <i>Discworld<\/i>.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><!--more--><\/p>\n<p>I figured that, in the end, Ardent would be a coward. His whole behavior has shown us that while he believes fervently in the idea that dwarfs are losing what it means to be dwarfish, he knows that, ultimately, what he\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s done is wrong. If he thinks he has been so righteous, why did he wait until Rhys was physically gone to try to take the Scone? For that matter, why <i>didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t<\/i> he ever take the Scone? And why, after he has murdered or had murdered so very many people, all in the name of protecting the world of the dwarfs, does he have nothing to say about himself? Nothing to defend? Nothing to proclaim?<\/p>\n<p>I think that Ardent\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s silence speaks louder than any attempt at a speech.<\/p>\n<p>But backing up a moment, I think there\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s so much to be said for Ardent\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s movement if we look at those who followed him. Like Moist, I expected a massive fight in Schmaltzberg. Look, there were so many heated and opposing opinions in this community, and the grags were CONSTANTLY willing to murder other people over it! And yes, many of them were manipulated or exploited or compelled to kill, but I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t think that necessarily matters to all the victims this group left behind. Where it <i>does<\/i> matter is in the construction of Ardent\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s hierarchal community. He sat at the top, and he had a trusted group close to him, but this was a (temporarily) successful endeavor not because of a shared common interest or belief. No, I would argue that the main thing that motivated the bulk of the grags and delvers was <i>fear<\/i>. Fear of the Other. Fear of those unlike them. Fear of Ardent\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s retribution if they didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t do what he wanted them to.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>So what happens when Ardent can\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t wield that fear? What happens when he\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s probably spent all this time saying their mission is guided by Tak, and yet they\u00e2\u20ac\u2122ve lost at <i>every<\/i> step of the way? As the Iron Girder got ever closer to Bonk, how many of Ardent\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s followers began to see Ardent for who he was? How many might have believed in his ideas, but became pragmatic as Rhys inched toward Bonk? How many really only cared about being behind whomever was currently in power?<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>And like Moist, I also misjudged dwarf culture, as I was expected something closer to Koom Valley. But thus far, there hasn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t all <i>that<\/i> much violence from one dwarf to another, at least compared to how many humans have been killed. So, when all of Rhys\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s dwarfs arrive, there is <i>some<\/i> fighting, but for the most part?<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153That\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s dwarf-on-dwarf war: a hell of a lot of shouting and accusing and spitting, a lot like cats really, but that\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s dwarfs for you. They\u00e2\u20ac\u2122re not that stupid. Bags of bravado and saber rattling, but no one really wants to get hurt. You fight, hoping for a small wound that looks good afterward. Something to show the grandchildren, but really, when it comes to it, dwarf against dwarf, it generally settles down.\u00e2\u20ac\u009d<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><i>That<\/i> speaks more to dwarf identity and tradition than anything Ardent put forth. Even after all the shit these dwarfs have been through, their \u00e2\u20ac\u0153war\u00e2\u20ac\u009d turns quickly into a post-brawl get-together. Like, it literally feels like some huge fight broke out in the pub for maybe ten minutes, and now everyone feels a little ashamed of what they\u00e2\u20ac\u2122ve done, so they\u00e2\u20ac\u2122re nursing one another\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s wounds and also nursing more alcohol.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>But this is not the end for the dwarfs and this plot. Indeed, while Pratchett closes much of the storyline, there\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s a <i>lot<\/i> here that\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s been left to the future, and to be honest? I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m super into it. When Rhys takes the Scone, she comes into her own by shedding the moniker of \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Low King\u00e2\u20ac\u009d for the \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Low Queen,\u00e2\u20ac\u009d and in doing so, she sets forth a future where the dwarfs <i>have<\/i> to choose who they\u00e2\u20ac\u2122re going to be. There\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s no more of Ardent telling dwarfs who they <i>have<\/i> to become. Instead, Rhys offers a strange sort of mercy to Ardent rather than execute him, and in doing so, she\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s setting a new precedent. How is justice achieved? What can this community do with people like Ardent, who are sure to pop up again? The easy answer would have been execution, but instead, by offering a trial (with victims\u00e2\u20ac\u2122 families part of the proceedings), Rhys lays down a new standard. What if justice can involve those who are wronged, rather than Rhys just having someone killed? What if closure can come by other means?<\/p>\n<p>It is, of course, the smaller of the options that Rhys puts before her people. She very proudly and defiantly opposes the culture of secrecy around gender, and <i>that<\/i> act ends up having immediate and heartwarming ramifications. I talked about this on video, but much of this feels like how coming out narratives work. In particular, this made me very happy:<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8230;a great many of the dwarfs she was talking to were already openly declaring themselves females who had been waiting for this moment for a very long.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>How many other ways has she changed this world just by being herself out loud, in front of everyone? This is why so many of us in this community have said how important coming out is. When someone lives their truth, it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s <i>infectious<\/i>. How many more dwarfs will we see like Rhys in a month? In a <i>year<\/i>? Also: how many people will change because of what Albrecht said and did? Because allies can have an immense influence on others as well. In this context, Albrecht\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s reputation is so solid and sure, and yet he still admitted that recent events changed his heart.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>Who else will experience this change in their heart, too?<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>I was also fascinated by Rhys\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s solution to those she knew were guilty of working for or with Ardent. She\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s opting for social <i>shame<\/i> to do the job that would otherwise be solved by bloodshed. This community is so close-knit that dwarfs will <i>know<\/i> who did something terrible. Does she expect that this community will also police itself in a sense? That through shunning and shame, the perpetrators are punished for what they did? It\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s certainly a much more peaceful option than\u00e2\u20ac\u00a6 well, the much more bloody option. She wants her reign as the Low Queen to begin with understanding. With peace. With empathy. With eyes open to a bright and <i>different<\/i> future than the ones the dwarfs have imagined before. That might even mean re-thinking what justice and mercy are in this new world.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00c2\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>There\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s one more thing in this split to talk about. The Iron Girder goddess! AHHHHH, I was actually right to postulate that the magic of belief on the Disc would imply that Iron Girder could be alive. I love that Pratchett didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t create a human-esque goddess either. No, this goddess is STEAM. Because of course she is!!! And Pratchett calls back to the very, very beginning of the book, and I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122d like to think that\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s what the title references. Steam has been raised, first as a love and an interest in the Simnel family, an idea born of trying to imagine a future in which this chaotic entity could be controlled safely and consistently. Once that idea grew beyond Dick Simnel, though, it was raised into the entire world. Or raised <i>by<\/i> the world, I should. Look what steam has become after all of this. Not just transportation, but the world has become both smaller <i>and<\/i> bigger. Smaller because places that were impossible to travel to are now within reach. People like Knut can now imagine a world outside of goats. (Nothing wrong with goats, mind you.) But it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s also <i>bigger<\/i>. For people like Albrecht and Moist and Vimes, and anyone else who has seen just how varied and diverse the Disc is. Their horizons have expanded, so to speak.<\/p>\n<p>All because of an idea. Something made of nothing, whose time has come to be.<\/p>\n<p>https:\/\/youtu.be\/VhrUQTC2e5k<\/p>\n<p><b>Mark Links Stuff<\/b><\/p>\n<p>&#8211; <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/us.macmillan.com\/books\/9781250169211\">You can now pre-order my second YA novel, <i>Each of Us a Desert<\/i>, which will be released on September 15, 2020 from Tor Teen!<\/a><br \/>\n&#8211; Not only that, but my very first pre-order campaign is now live for North American readers! <a href=\"http:\/\/bit.ly\/EachOfUsADesertPreorder\">If you submit proof of pre-order, you can get a limited edition print that comes with the book<\/a>.<br \/>\n<\/strong><strong>&#8211; If you&#8217;d like to stay up-to-date on all announcements regarding my books, <a href=\"http:\/\/eepurl.com\/ey636\">sign up for my newsletter<\/a>! DO IT.<\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In the twenty-fourth and penultimate part of Raising Steam, Rhys tells the truth. Intrigued? 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