{"id":3845,"date":"2016-06-10T05:00:57","date_gmt":"2016-06-10T12:00:57","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/?p=3845"},"modified":"2016-06-05T21:16:05","modified_gmt":"2016-06-06T04:16:05","slug":"mark-reads-deep-wizardry-chapter-12-part-ii","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/2016\/06\/mark-reads-deep-wizardry-chapter-12-part-ii\/","title":{"rendered":"Mark Reads &#8216;Deep Wizardry&#8217;: Chapter 12, Part II"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In the second half of the twelfth chapter of\u00c2\u00a0<i>Deep Wizardry<\/i>, I WASN\u00e2\u20ac\u2122T READY. Intrigued? Then it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s time for Mark to read\u00c2\u00a0<i>Young Wizards<\/i>.\u00c2\u00a0<!--more--><\/p>\n<p>Wow.\u00c2\u00a0<i>Wow<\/i>. I almost wish I could get away with writing a review that was just that because it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s honestly the most succinct way of describing this experience. It\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s incredible to me that Duane was able to handle so much chaos in a manner that\u00c2\u00a0<i>felt<\/i>\u00c2\u00a0effortless to me. (And now that I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m doing lots of fiction writing, I know it isn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t actually effortless most of the time.)<\/p>\n<p>Let\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s talk about the Song.<\/p>\n<p><b>The Untouched<\/b><\/p>\n<p>Duane cycles through the three parts of the Song itself without ever losing me. Initially, we go through the \u00e2\u20ac\u0153easiest\u00e2\u20ac\u009d part first: the Untouched, the three whales who all reject what the Lone Power offers them. I understood why she spent less time on these three than the other six singers. They\u00e2\u20ac\u2122re the most uninteresting, technically, because while they all struggle with rejecting temptation, none of them break from the tradition of the Song. We do get a hint for how powerful that temptation is, given how shaky the singers are in their rejection.<\/p>\n<p><b>The Betrayed<\/b><\/p>\n<p>Which brings us to the other scary part of the Song: the three whales who all succumb to temptation as the whales did in the original Song. Like with the Untouched, Duane didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t go into much detail with them. She didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t\u00c2\u00a0<i>need<\/i>\u00c2\u00a0to; each of them fell before the Lone Power, and they made way for the hardest, most challenging aspect of the Song.<\/p>\n<p><b>The Undecided<\/b><\/p>\n<p>It\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s fitting to me that within the Undecided, Duane finds a way to deliver the most horrifying curveball imaginable. It was creepy to think that these three whales \u00e2\u20ac\u201c T!h!ki, Fluke, and Areinnye \u00e2\u20ac\u201c were all chosen because their own desires and interests closely matched what the Lone Power would tempt them with. For T!h!ki, the Lone Power offered \u00e2\u20ac\u0153all the hidden knowledge of the great deeps.\u00e2\u20ac\u009d Fluke was offered \u00e2\u20ac\u0153the power to hear everything that transpired in the Sea, from the random thoughts of new-hatched fry to the secret ponderings of the continental plates,\u00e2\u20ac\u009d which is TOTALLY UNREAL. (And think more on that\u00e2\u20ac\u00a6 it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s not that the Lone Power couldn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t actually deliver on the promise. I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m sure they would. But I imagine there wouldn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t be a world left if they disrupted the Song, you know?<\/p>\n<p>Then there\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s Areinnye, who represented chaos and an untrustworthy variable before, at least for a moment. Here, though, the Lone Power shocks everyone (AND ME. ME SO MUCH) by BREAKING FROM THE SONG. I didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t even know you\u00c2\u00a0<i>could<\/i>\u00c2\u00a0do that, but they ruin everything by offering Areinnye REVENGE:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u00e2\u20ac\u0153Take up my Gift and take a life for life,<br \/>\nas it was done of old\u00e2\u20ac\u201c\u00e2\u20ac\u0153<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>The Lone Power exploits exactly what we all worried of Areinnye and compels her to attack the only \u00e2\u20ac\u0153human\u00e2\u20ac\u009d near her, Nita. From this point onwards, this chapter is pure chaos. Once Areinnye breaks from the circle, protocol is thrown to the wind. The whales must rely on desperation and creativity not only to survive, but to find a way to complete the Song before it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s too late. But what prevents them from doing this? OH, YOU\u00e2\u20ac\u2122RE GETTING A LIST BECAUSE THERE\u00e2\u20ac\u2122S SO MUCH HERE AND I JUST WANT TO DEMONSTRATE HOW MANY SINGLE ACTS OCCUR WITHIN THE SPAN OF THIS CHAPTER:<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>First, there is Areinnye\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s attack on Nita upsets the Song.<\/li>\n<li>Then, Areinnye leaves the boundaries of the protective spell, meaning that there is a vacancy in the Song in the part of the Gray Lord, so Nita has to quickly give Kit the Celebrant\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s Oath.<\/li>\n<li>The Lone Power offers Kit immortality for himself and Nita. IMMORTALITY. PLAYING RIGHT INTO KIT\u00e2\u20ac\u2122S DESIRE TO SAVE HIS BEST FRIEND.<\/li>\n<li>Then the Ocean heats up. This all happens in like two pages, y\u00e2\u20ac\u2122all. BUCKLE IN, THIS IS A WILD RIDE.<\/li>\n<li>Right as Nita is about to fulfill her part of the song, a gigantic black kraken attacks her and pulls her away from Caryn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s Peak.<\/li>\n<li>BECAUSE MOTHERFUCKING AREINNYE BETRAYED THEM ALL AND WENT AND GOT MORE KRAKENS.<\/li>\n<li><i>WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS BOOK<\/i>.<\/li>\n<li>So, while chaos reigns and no one can even think about completing the Song because they all have to destroy the krakens that are attacking them, Kit loses the language. Meaning his sark is about to reject him, LEAVING HIM A HUMAN THREE MILES DOWN INTO THE OCEAN.<\/li>\n<li>At this point, I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t even know if I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m halfway through tracking this unfolding disaster. The reason I wanted to make this list wasn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t to summarize the scene; I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t feel compelled to do much summarizing in these reviews because the vast majority of you know know everything that happens. But I wanted to highlight just how intense all of this was. The sheer weight of the violence hit me hard, sure. However, this climactic fight was the culmination of so many details and tiny plot threads spread throughout the book that I also felt\u00c2\u00a0<i>impressed<\/i>.<\/li>\n<li>For example: Nita realizes once Kit loses his language that she can willingly sacrifice herself to save\u00c2\u00a0<i>him<\/i>, which gives her a satisfaction that has nothing to do with the \u00e2\u20ac\u0153abstract idea of ten million deaths.\u00e2\u20ac\u009d In that moment, this whole Song becomes uniquely personal to her.<\/li>\n<li>AND THEN ED BLOCKS HER FROM SACRIFICING HERSELF AND DEMANDS THAT SHE HAND OVER ALL HER MAGICAL POWER SO HE CAN CALL FOR HELP. It\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s a jarring moment because I was readying myself for Nita\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s end, and Ed\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s plan made no sense to me. Wouldn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t the Song have ended once Nita sacrificed herself? Why delay it further?<\/li>\n<li>It seemed even more foolish when the Long Power materialized in this realm AS A GIANT SNAKE MADE OF LAVA. THIS SEEMED TO BE THE WORST POSSIBLE TWIST AND I WAS SO CONFUSED BY ED.\u00c2\u00a0<i>WHY NOW<\/i>?<\/li>\n<li>(As an aside, I found the Lone Power\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s form to be a powerful image, given that Duane references the serpent in the Bible here.)<\/li>\n<li>Nita ignores Ed and decides to complete the Song herself, and Kit \u00e2\u20ac\u201c brave, stubborn Kit, who was so isolated and alone and sad when Nita found him, who had grown into a powerful, certain wizard alongside her \u00e2\u20ac\u201c risks his own life to ram the Serpent repeatedly to distract It, all to by Nita more time to complete the Song.<\/li>\n<li>I love Kit Rodriguez so much.<\/li>\n<li>Oh, then Areinnye shows up to punch Nita again.<\/li>\n<li>Oh, and Ed got attacked by her and is bleeding profusely into the Sea.<\/li>\n<li>OH, AND THEN HE RAMS HER SO HARD IN HER HEAD THAT SHE BECOMES DISORIENTED.<\/li>\n<li><b>AND THEN ED WILLINGLY TAKES HER PLACES IN THE SONG AND SACRIFICES HIMSELF BY BITING THE SERPENT, WHO CRUSHES HIM IN ITS JAWS<\/b>.<\/li>\n<li>AND THEN ED\u00e2\u20ac\u2122S PLAN COMES TO FRUITION: HIS BLOOD IS THE ONLY THING THAT CAN ACTIVATE HIS POWER AS THE MASTER-SLAYER AND BRING\u00c2\u00a0<i>EVERY SHARK<\/i>\u00c2\u00a0TO HIS LOCATION, AND TENS OF THOUSANDS OF SHARKS SHOW UP AND DESTROY THE LONE POWER AND AREINNYE.<\/li>\n<li>WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS BOOK.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>Ed took Nita\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s place, y\u00e2\u20ac\u2122all. I don\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t think I ever could have guessed this outcome, and I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m going to quote the text again because this is honestly how I feel:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Aching all over, impossibly tired, Nita hung there for several minutes, simply not knowing what to do. She hadn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t planned to live this long.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Because\u00c2\u00a0<i>RIGHT<\/i>? I was so overwhelmed by this chapter that I didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t know what to react to. I felt sad that Ed was now gone, relieved that Nita was alive, overjoyed that Kit\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s sark did not reject him, but\u00e2\u20ac\u00a6 it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s all so much.\u00c2\u00a0<i>It<\/i><i>\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s all so much.<\/i><\/p>\n<p>I can\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t believe they did it. I wasn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t exactly expecting a negative end, but Duane constructed this finale to make it pretty impossible for me to see a conclusion that didn\u00e2\u20ac\u2122t involve Nita\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s death. Y\u00e2\u20ac\u2122all, I\u00e2\u20ac\u2122m\u00c2\u00a0<i>spent<\/i>.<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><i>Incurred:\u00c2\u00a0<\/i><br \/>\n<i>5\/25\/08<\/i><\/p>\n<p><i>Paid:<\/i><br \/>\n<i>7\/15\/08, by willing substitution.<\/i><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>IT\u00e2\u20ac\u2122S TOO SAD AND TOO HAPPY ALL AT THE SAME TIME.<\/p>\n<p><b>Diane Duane is still offering a massive discount on the first 9 books in the\u00c2\u00a0<i>Young Wizards<\/i>\u00c2\u00a0series just to this community, so please take advantage of this deal while you still can:<\/b><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/bit.ly\/markreadsYW\">http:\/\/bit.ly\/markreadsYW<\/a><\/p>\n<p>https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=CHAM1Z3_4IU<\/p>\n<p><b>Mark Links Stuff<\/b><\/p>\n<p>&#8211; <b><a href=\"https:\/\/www.patreon.com\/markdoesstuff?ty=h\" target=\"_blank\">I am now on Patreon<\/a><\/b>!!! <a href=\"http:\/\/markwatches.net\/reviews\/2015\/05\/updates-european-tour-patreon-h-a-l-p\/\" target=\"_blank\">MANY SURPRISES ARE IN STORE FOR YOU IF YOU SUPPORT ME<\/a>.<br \/>\n&#8211; I\u00c2\u00a0will be at numerous conventions in 2016! <a href=\"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/tour-dates-appearances\/\" target=\"_blank\">Check the full list of events on my Tour Dates \/ Appearances page.<\/a><br \/>\n&#8211; My <a href=\"https:\/\/www.google.com\/calendar\/embed?src=815s3sbr8clhdi9tn8k7r3tim4%40group.calendar.google.com&amp;ctz=America\/Los_Angeles\">Master Schedule<\/a> is updated for the near and distant future for most projects, so please check it often.\u00c2\u00a0<b>My next Double Features for Mark Watches will be <em>Death Note<\/em>\u00c2\u00a0and\u00c2\u00a0<em>Neon Genesis Evangelion<\/em>. On Mark Reads, Diane Duane&#8217;s <i>Young Wizards<\/i> series will replace the Emelan books.<br \/>\n<\/b>-\u00c2\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.facebook.com\/markdoesstuff\">Mark Does Stuff is on Facebook!<\/a>\u00c2\u00a0I&#8217;ve got a community page up that I&#8217;m running. Guaranteed shenanigans!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In the second half of the twelfth chapter of\u00c2\u00a0Deep Wizardry, I WASN\u00e2\u20ac\u2122T READY. Intrigued? Then it\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s time for Mark to read\u00c2\u00a0Young Wizards.\u00c2\u00a0<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[515,510],"tags":[513,511],"class_list":["post-3845","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-deep-wizardry","category-young-wizards","tag-diane-duane","tag-mark-reads-young-wizards"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3845","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=3845"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3845\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=3845"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=3845"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/markreads.net\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=3845"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}<!-- WP Super Cache is installed but broken. 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